GB sound very odd! I suspect you played it on bass drum which has no pitch... Defeats the object of a pitched ground bass! Why stop P1 when P2 comes in. P3 starts late and is therefore out of time with the GB and again, why stop the previous parts? P4 the pitch at the start is incorrect & there are rhythm issues. I thought we had this sorted from our earlier practicing?! P5 The rhythm inaccuracy you comment on in your reflection, but you are still making the same pitch mistakes as you made in your earlier work. I thought we had looked at this and corrected it! P6 A reasonable attempt but there are a lot of mistakes that you could have edited in mixcraft, rhythm & pitch. P7 again reasonably okay, but does have rhythm & pitch errors. You have made an attempt at a varying structure, you could have been more creative by layering more than 2 parts at any one time. I like the sounds you have tried to use, next time to to think about how appropriate they are, e.g. bass drum, and how they sound together, do they balance up in volume, are they usually placed together? Try to act on previous advice rather than hearing/reading it and doing nothing about it. That way you can improve your work over time.
GB sound very odd! I suspect you played it on bass drum which has no pitch... Defeats the object of a pitched ground bass! Why stop P1 when P2 comes in. P3 starts late and is therefore out of time with the GB and again, why stop the previous parts? P4 the pitch at the start is incorrect & there are rhythm issues. I thought we had this sorted from our earlier practicing?! P5 The rhythm inaccuracy you comment on in your reflection, but you are still making the same pitch mistakes as you made in your earlier work. I thought we had looked at this and corrected it! P6 A reasonable attempt but there are a lot of mistakes that you could have edited in mixcraft, rhythm & pitch. P7 again reasonably okay, but does have rhythm & pitch errors. You have made an attempt at a varying structure, you could have been more creative by layering more than 2 parts at any one time. I like the sounds you have tried to use, next time to to think about how appropriate they are, e.g. bass drum, and how they sound together, do they balance up in volume, are they usually placed together? Try to act on previous advice rather than hearing/reading it and doing nothing about it. That way you can improve your work over time.
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